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thanks for the moon....by ~justincurrie

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critiques please!!

i wanted to use this piece for an upcoming gallery- however I've been staring at it so long that i don't know what to think of it anymore, y'know?

your thoughts would be appreciated mates!
cheers
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~Heroes-Die Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Just saw this on the cover of On Spec! It looks gorgeous.
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~drk-vnvc May 6, 2009
in my opinion everything is splendid except that dark face line, it really stands out and somehow ruins the whole moonlight concept.. but thats just me (:
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~justincurrie May 6, 2009
hmm, now that you mention it, that does stand out a tad much... I think id like to keep her eye dark, but ill explore options with the face line. thanks!

this is great feedback im getting, you guys rock.
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*desmo100 May 5, 2009
I love the moon, sky, and string....the girl is pretty, too. The only thing I would change is the hair; I'd make it a bit smoother, finer. Doing hair in Illustrator is hard, though. I don't like doing it! :lol:
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~justincurrie May 5, 2009
many thanks for the feedback- and i agree on the hair sitch, needs work.
cheers
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*desmo100 May 6, 2009
You're very welcome! I hope the comment was helpful.
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~meepers369 May 5, 2009
Haha love how you advertised for yourself on my piece. :XD: I looove the dress and the concept. The only problem I have with it is the skin, it looks too yellow to fit in with your mood. Maybe a more whitish blueish pinkish color?
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~justincurrie May 5, 2009
:) just thought we both used similar illustrator techniques- i was going for a very pale/light figure for the piece, but ill defiantly try some skin variations- thanks for the comment
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~scho-oo May 5, 2009   Digital Artist
this is a nice piece, but i would like to see the hair more natural looking and also the dress more fluid like...but i gotta say that i love the colours here and the concept is great too. :D
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~justincurrie May 5, 2009
thanks! I will take another swipe at the hair situation- as well as looking at making her dress a bit longer/more sweepy looking...
thanks again!
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